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    Inactive Member ranter's Avatar
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    i did, i built the foundation-
    BUT, i di-i didnt know-oh if id only knew!!!

    too late, it has been done- now they keep adding bars, bars of all scenes of degenerate lyfestyles
    bamboo bars shaved down with pointed ends
    stainless sinless steel with shiny unrusted bars
    solid termite-encrusted oak bars with clear new varnish
    courderouy concrete brown bars with cords that run all the way home

    and they are closing in my freeflying soul and what am i supposed to do?
    just sit back and take it?
    but i am not that kind, i have a soul i am a man-
    i can think and act and talk and perform and remove and describe and fuck and remain and deliberate-i know who i am
    i am the spring to your fall, i am the sun to your moon i am the codeine to your aderal i am the thom to your everyone else....geeez and now where the hell am i going?

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    I really like the last paragraph...it's a list...like a grocery list....but in a very poetic sense....(you know, I was actually thinking 'bout doing that...but hey) but it is really nice...man, what visions! you are my thom to everyone else! har har !

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